Is Your Story Working or Not?

Think about the last speech you heard. They spoke for 40 minutes, and I bet the only part you remember is the 5-minute story they shared.⁠

Story is the tool our brain uses to make sense of our world.

Story is what’s connected us as humans, sitting around the fireside from the beginning of time.⁠ It’s how we’ve passed down memories, advice, and even history.

Our brains find stories 100% irresistible.⁠

But here’s the thing…⁠

Most entrepreneurs are telling their brand stories the wrong way.⁠

They are making themselves the hero of their own story.⁠

How can you know if you’re telling your brand story the wrong way?

  1. You use a lot of “I, me, we” language on your site instead of “you, your.”

  2. You have long paragraphs of copy that require a lot of time and effort to read.

  3. You share many of features about your service instead of the benefits your clients will experience.

If that sounds like you, the good news is this is a fast, easy fix… and one you don’t have to do alone.

Introducing the Strategic StorySelling System!

In 3 simple steps and 2.5 hours flat, you'll get a high-converting copy that sells — so you can do what you do best. I know it sounds too good to be true, but it’s not. After 20 years in the industry I created a streamlined 1:1 collaborative process that’s surprisingly enjoyable!

Book a storytelling strategy session!

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